Crisis of Infinite Peril #2
Chapter 3 (or 4?) - Super JK
So ... yeah... after posting part of the prologue, response for this project has been pretty terrible. Most of you are probably wondering where the peril is. So i decided to skip past the prologue a little to see if response improves.
Also asking viewer to post their opinion on the costumes. Do you like the darker one, or lighter one.
Dialogue to copy past incase you need Google Translate. There were some typos in typesetting that i didn't feel like fixing that have been corrected below.
Page 1
- Super JK floats in the sky staying alert for trouble
- Her ears perks, Super Hearing picks up a disturbance downtown.
- This feels like a job for ... SUPER JK
Page 2
-A Kaiju is running rampant through the streets. Super JK kicks it to get the monsters attention.
-Super JK's eyes glower a bright gold.
- Firey lances of heat lance out to set the Kaiju on fire.
Page 3
-The Kaiju is frustrated as Super JK darts about just out of reach while wearing it down with lancing beams to scorch the thick hide.
- The unsuspecting Super JK doesn't realize the Kaiju is just a decoy to set her up.
Page 4
- An emerald burst of energy blindsides Super JK. Intense agony radiates from her left breast where it struck, draining her energy as it spread.
Page 5
- Super JK can no longer continue flying and falls out of the sky to crash to the ground.
- As emerald energy eats away at her energy, the golden hue fades from her eyes.
- Super JK is surprised and left helpless by the sudden attack and vulnerable for seveal long moments. The Kaiju does not wait for it's tormentor to recover and slams down on her slender body with crushing force. The massive weight drives down on the back of the stricken heroines several times.
Page 6
- This continues until Super JK is rendered unconscious, unmoving, and is no longer a threat. The Kaiju moves on to deal with the military. Leaving Super JK behind.
- Footsteps echo as they approach the senseless heroine. A foot shoves her to rollover to her back. The slow rise and fall of her breast indicate that some how Super JK has survived the brutal encounter. With what they have planned for her, she may regret surviving.
Page 7
- Before she can recover from the beating she just took, a collar is produced, that glows with the same energy that struck Super JK earlier.
- Super JK struggles for a moment, but stills when the collar robs her of the little energy she's recovered.
- Super JK is no stronger than the young JK that she resembles. Ropes that moments ago might have been strands of thread restrick her arm movement, making her helpless. The rumbling sound of transport approached.
Page 8
- Super JK is unconscious, and as long as th collar is worn will stay that way. With little preamble, she is thrown into the back of the vechicle where she lies unmoving.
- The tight confines are secured by a door locking in place. The truck drives off transporting Super JK to the hidden lab for processing.
Also asking viewer to post their opinion on the costumes. Do you like the darker one, or lighter one.
Dialogue to copy past incase you need Google Translate. There were some typos in typesetting that i didn't feel like fixing that have been corrected below.
Page 1
- Super JK floats in the sky staying alert for trouble
- Her ears perks, Super Hearing picks up a disturbance downtown.
- This feels like a job for ... SUPER JK
Page 2
-A Kaiju is running rampant through the streets. Super JK kicks it to get the monsters attention.
-Super JK's eyes glower a bright gold.
- Firey lances of heat lance out to set the Kaiju on fire.
Page 3
-The Kaiju is frustrated as Super JK darts about just out of reach while wearing it down with lancing beams to scorch the thick hide.
- The unsuspecting Super JK doesn't realize the Kaiju is just a decoy to set her up.
Page 4
- An emerald burst of energy blindsides Super JK. Intense agony radiates from her left breast where it struck, draining her energy as it spread.
Page 5
- Super JK can no longer continue flying and falls out of the sky to crash to the ground.
- As emerald energy eats away at her energy, the golden hue fades from her eyes.
- Super JK is surprised and left helpless by the sudden attack and vulnerable for seveal long moments. The Kaiju does not wait for it's tormentor to recover and slams down on her slender body with crushing force. The massive weight drives down on the back of the stricken heroines several times.
Page 6
- This continues until Super JK is rendered unconscious, unmoving, and is no longer a threat. The Kaiju moves on to deal with the military. Leaving Super JK behind.
- Footsteps echo as they approach the senseless heroine. A foot shoves her to rollover to her back. The slow rise and fall of her breast indicate that some how Super JK has survived the brutal encounter. With what they have planned for her, she may regret surviving.
Page 7
- Before she can recover from the beating she just took, a collar is produced, that glows with the same energy that struck Super JK earlier.
- Super JK struggles for a moment, but stills when the collar robs her of the little energy she's recovered.
- Super JK is no stronger than the young JK that she resembles. Ropes that moments ago might have been strands of thread restrick her arm movement, making her helpless. The rumbling sound of transport approached.
Page 8
- Super JK is unconscious, and as long as th collar is worn will stay that way. With little preamble, she is thrown into the back of the vechicle where she lies unmoving.
- The tight confines are secured by a door locking in place. The truck drives off transporting Super JK to the hidden lab for processing.
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作品发布日期: 2023年03月11日 00:50
最后更新时间: 2025年03月26日 00:04
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